When reviewing our trailer we noticed that there is an error in one of the shots. Rachael can be seen in the reflection of one of the windows. In our next draft, we will make sure there are no more errors like this. I fixed the shot by cropping the image, removing Rachael's reflection from the frame.
This draft was to focus on the visuals, the next draft we make will include a main track and more sound effects.
Some other feedback we received was that we should include variation in our clip length. We should also try and zoom in
on some areas of the clip so the audience know what to focus on as it isn't very obvious.
For our third draft we will take onboard the feedback we recived.
Feedback:
For our third draft we will take onboard the feedback we recived.
Feedback:
- Intersperse the shorter clips inbetween slightly longer ones
- Include visual effects
- Ensure the focal points are clear
One comment we recieved was that our trailer felt very clostrophobic due to all the close ups. For this project we think that is positive as we want the viewers to feel uncomfortable. In the trailers we researched, this is a common convention as it conveys the genre succesfuly.
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