Notes and Feedback 1

When our first draft was presented to the class we received feedback on how to improve

• Finish adding sound effects
• Find and include suspense building music that we can include from the beginning
• Cut the shots down from 1.5 seconds to 1 second or less

They liked the varied interesting shots, the dialogue and the intense hand coming out of the bed at the end. They thought we had a good use of settings and non continuity.

For our second draft we will take the advice on board and make the trailer more impactful.